Tolkien's Landscapes 3: 'Moonlight on a Wood' ~ picture by Tolkien, poem by jan-u-wine.

[mechtild]

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Tolkien created 'Moonlight on a Wood' in a spurt of artistic and literary creativity that burst forth in the late 1920's. As was seen in the previous post, Tolkien long had been drawing from life. He also had been making imaginative, non-realistic pictures, particularly in 1913-15, which illustrated his expanding secondary world. But he made few pictures in the years that followed, and, after 1922, none at all.

In 1927-28, however, his imagination exploded. His art work exploded along with his ideas for developing his secondary world. His style in illustration became more painterly, more confident, and, though he still favoured bright colours, more subtle. Perhaps the family holidays at Lyme-Regis in 1927-28 afforded him the opportunities he needed to express himself in art.

'Moonlight on a Wood' is a nearly unique piece in that Tolkien rendered the picture's trees in a Cubist manner. I don't know what Tolkien intended to convey though this experimentation in style, but I find the picture's angular starkness strongly evocative, beautiful but mysterious, chilly, eerie, even hallucinatory, as if I were a mortal entering the Perilous Realm.

Jan-u-wine's poem responds to the picture's stark mystery in its own way, using words rather than brush strokes. She said of the uniqueness of the picture, "It really is a mesmerizing piece, isn't it? So weird and yet so.....wonderful. I really would like to have known what was in his mind. This is surely...jazz from a man who was always a classicist....."




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Moonlight on a Wood


The smell of them is
thick

with winter
and blood-resin,


needles
of cold, sharp
scent

and lemon light,
mingled,


the jagged
prism

of their joining
lying

fragments
of

slipped silver
and

moss'd green
upon the forest's

iced floor.

Unreachable,
this resolute

moon,

dark-countenanced
beneath

a template of
dream.....

the light-ice
of his fingers

moving,

a distanc'd
benediction,

upon the crown-points
of snow-sleeping
pine.

~*~

Previous entry:

~ "Foxglove Year" by jan-u-wine for watercolour of the same name by Tolkien.

Other Links:

~ All entries featuring jan-u-wine's poems.

Comments

[lavendertook.livejournal.com]

It's an interesting study in texture and perspectives. The thick light area under the moon looks more to me like it's a pedestal or trunk than moon beams, which makes me think this is of the first tree in Valinor. Together with his painting of Valinor that you posted on Ring Day, I'm wondering if he felt he needed to go abstract to picture the Blessed Realm.

Jan, your poem adds the curves and naturalism that fill in all the colors in the drawing and brings the stark lines to life for me. This poem's words build to a beautiful crescendo.

[mechtild.livejournal.com]

The thick light area under the moon looks more to me like it's a pedestal or trunk than moon beams, which makes me think this is of the first tree in Valinor.

WHAT an interesting thought. Yes, it does look quite treeish when I go back and have a look. Was the Telperion made first, do you remember, or were the two trees created simultaneously?

Jan, your poem adds the curves and naturalism that fill in all the colors in the drawing and brings the stark lines to life for me.

What an astute, delight-giving perception, Lavender! :)

[jan-u-wine.livejournal.com]

Metchtild, i saw this comment only after I'd posted my own (which rather echoes yours...!)

Telpirion was created first. Lovely entry at Encyclopedia of Arda:

http://www.glyphweb.com/arda/t/twotrees.html

Such wonderful attention to detail, whether it be in drawing or writing......

[mechtild.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the info, Jan!

[jan-u-wine.livejournal.com]

youre welcome!

look at your lovely icon.....is that a boy Frodo, piping away?

[mechtild.livejournal.com]

Nope, lol, it's [Sophie?] Anderson's "Shepherd Piper", a detail, but I confess it made me think of little Sam or one of the Boffin boys when they were little (the brothers I made up for my fanfic, their family known for its fruit orchards and its sheep).

http://www.paintingall.com/images/P/Sophie-Anderson-Shepherd-Piper-Oil-Painting.jpg

[jan-u-wine.livejournal.com]

well, i note that a lot of images i think would make swell Frodo's seem to be of the ......*fairer* sex. Gets you thinking about that 'fairer than most' thing.....

[mechtild.livejournal.com]

That shepherd piper is a girl????

[jan-u-wine.livejournal.com]

oh, sorry, i saw "Sophie" and got my brain confuzzled.

happens a lot lately......i be goin' ole folk home any day now.....

[mechtild.livejournal.com]

i be goin' ole folk home any day now.....

See you there.

[jan-u-wine.livejournal.com]

wow, finally enuf time to chat....

[mechtild.livejournal.com]

HA HA! (Or, should I say, cackle cackle...)

[jan-u-wine.livejournal.com]

i'm putting the "Tol E" sign outside of my room. We'll see how many numpties ask what *that* means...

See? I'm cultivating my elderly grouchiness already.

"You Elf kids stay the Sammath Naur offa my lawn!"

[mechtild.livejournal.com]

numpties?

[jan-u-wine.livejournal.com]

Potter speak for 'idiots'



Apr 3, 2007 - Scotland's favourite word, according to a poll by BT Openreach, is numpty. Derived from "numps", an obsolete word for a stupid person

[mechtild.livejournal.com]

Thank you for the explanation! I had no idea. It's a very enjoyable word to look at and to say. :)

[jan-u-wine.livejournal.com]

i agree. And oh so much nicer than say "you're an idiot" to an American's face (a Scotsman, of course, may be a numpty of a different color entirely)

Well...

[diem-kieu94.livejournal.com]

" I note that a lot of images i think would make swell Frodo's seem to be of the ......*fairer* sex. Gets you thinking about that 'fairer than most' thing....."

If Frodo is indeed of the "fairer sex"... Then I must be lesbian! HA HA HA HA HA!!! XD

[jan-u-wine.livejournal.com]

wow, LT, now that is an interesting thought (that this might be the first tree)! I really thought it was light, tho perhaps NOT the light of the moon (perhaps the moon and sun are in the sky together, the sun not shown except by these 'thick' rays, perhaps it is the first day in the creation of the world, everything not in its place yet). Note, above the moon and to the left a little, what looks like a stairway, climbing upwards.

The stairway to the Sun?

Overall, to me, a fascinating but very.....mechanical looking piece. I expect someone to come wind it up at any moment, at which point "Rhapsody in Blue " will play and the moon will jerkily move about the 'sky', the pines bending together in a cog-driven wind.

did you notice how reminiscent of this piece TORN's "obey" tee is?

http://www.theonering.net/torwp/2013/07/06/75186-last-chance-for-buy-2-get-1-free/

I tried to be as stark and linear as i could in the poem, but i really am a Samwise sort of girl. I read a bit of Ferlingetti and Ginsberg (can you WAIT to see that movie? I can't!!!!!!) to psych myself up, but i can't really write in that style. In any case, i am so very glad you enjoyed the post. I really am fascinated by this piece and wish i could write more to it, but the 'how' part has thus far escaped me.

well, ta for now!