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Mechtild's ([personal profile] mechtild) wrote2006-05-15 02:01 am

Frodo Art Travesty: Another Bronzino portrait, plus jan-u-wine's 'Aiya Eärendil'....



~ Detail of Frodo in Bronzino’s portrait of Ugolino Martelli.

I couldn't resist. I had to do one more Art Travesty based on a painting by Bronzino, his portrait of Ugolino Martelli....

This portrait was painted in 1535. To see the original Bronzino, click here.

The Bronzino portrait, as usual, is beautifully rendered, composed and reflective. (However, film-Frodo’s face greatly improves the painting.) The screencap used for the face is from the Bree sequence, just as Frodo is hearing the clear calling of the Ring.

What does Frodo hear in this portrait?

This manip evoked for me a very contemplative, introspective Frodo. The setting and the books at first reminded me of Bag End: Frodo Baggins, scholar. But I was "previewing" this manip to fellow Tolkien fan and poet, jan-u-wine, and she noted the considerable size of the interior or exterior (is the subject in a courtyard?): formal, airy, and stately. Perhaps, Frodo in Rivendell...?

I was hoping it would inspire her to write another poem and it did.





Frodo in the library of Rivendell, as painted by Agnolo Bronzino:







Aiya Eärendil

~ by jan-u-wine


The Road is not long between the City of the White Tree
and the close-held autumn of Rivendell.

Not long,
perhaps,

save to those of weary heart.

I am one such,

weary
in heart

(and mind),
saddened, more,
by the small figure
who does not rise to my greeting,
but stays

close and quiet and parchment-skinned fragile
before the orange-red grate.

He sleeps and wakes and sleeps again
and oft-times knows me not,

though just as oft-times asks after that
which I bore.

It grieves me
to see him thus.

To know I have made him thus.

I, who only loved him,

who only
loved

them all.

_____________________


A messenger has brought
words of courtesy from my Lord Elrond:

as if I were a Prince of his own blood,
he begs me attend upon him this day.

And so I do, my steps falling small and half-soundless
in the vast halls.

Almost the beginning of the World he has seen,
my Lord Elrond

yet
his eyes hold still to Spring as he takes my hand,
greets me in the tongue of the Fair Folk.

Somewhat of what he says, I understand.

Somewhat
I do not,

though
I lose myself in the music of it,

the unknown words like the voices of wind and stars,
sighing like the Sea in the First Morning.

He is smiling at me.

Blood brightens my cheeks:
his speech had ceased some little while ago
while I dreamt on,

the words finding shape and meaning within my heart.

In the common tongue,
now.

he recalls to me the tale of Eärendil,
(whose Light I also bore).

Eärendil,
whose name means "Lover of the Sea",
Eärendil,
the mortal Mariner,

Eärendil, my Lord Elrond's father.

There is a book within my Lord's hand,
and robes of sombre hue upon his arm.

The robes he draws close about me.

*Scholar's robes*
he notes,

*scholar's robes for he who need learn no more...
for he who

perforce
must
learn every thing*.

The book he gifts me with, as well,
soft-flowing mithril

forming with grace'd runes the Sea-star name of his father.

It strikes me,
of a sudden,

that we are both orphans,

orphans,
of a sort,

sundered, both, by rivers of water and sky.

With humble'd thanks, I leave him
standing:

proud

silent

estrangedly alone.

Within a quieten'd autumn courtyard,
I find a cloth-draped bench,

open the book beneath the spill of amber sun.


As if it were my own heart beating with my own blood,
the words flow within me:

now slow and soft
like meadows of spring under a new sun,

now swift and unconquerable,
like the crash of angry waves upon a resistant shore.

And I read the words, more with fingers that *feel* the sense of them
than with eyes that cannot......

I read until it becomes dark
and even the perfection of night in the Last Homely House dims with chill.

Light, soft like a candle lit in a far-away window, steals across the page.

It is *he*.

He whose tale I read,

he
who sails forever upon the Sea of the sky,
the glowing timbers of his benighted barque the very stars....

He is calling me,

Elven words and Sea-songs playing through me like aged wine,
dappling like the gilt-green of sun upon the hidden pools of the Brandywine.

I have no words like these,

only
my own light,

such as it is,
small

yet joyous,

to answer him with.

And I still myself,

and think of him,
sailing til the ages end upon the face of the night,

bound forever to see the great wheel
of life turn the world from joy to grief

and back again.

I look down upon my hands,
there,

beyond the sombre drape of the robe,
to where they hold the book open as if
the night itself might partake of the story.


My hands are adrift with Light.

And I know.

With joy,
with sorrow,

I know:

His road
shall

be mine.








~ To browse jan-u-wine's Lord of the Rings-based poetry, click HERE.



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Edited to add.... a "Thank You" from jan-u-wine:
I'm much better at writing poetry than prose, better still at voicing thoughts that are not strictly my own, but I did want to thank all of you for your very kind and thoughtful remarks in regards to Aiya Eärendil. If you should visit the Scrapbook where my poetry is archived, I hope that you will take the opportunity to browse a bit (for there IS always room for a little more!) and sample the many fine writers whose work 'lives' on that site. Thank you again for all your lovely comments! ~jan~

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I love what jan-u-wine wrote, picking up so many threads of what Frodo might have been thinking in Rivendell. But what she did working with the figure of Eärendil enchanted me (the character I discussed last time as a “type” of Frodo in Tolkien’s thought world), especially the end.

After I read her poem, I looked back to the actual text. What an evocative chapter it is.

Here is an excerpt:


After the celebration of Bilbo’s birthday the four hobbits stayed in Rivendell for some days, and they sat much with their old friend, who spent most of this time now in his room, except at meals. For these was still very punctual as a rule, and he seldom failed to wake up in time for them. Sitting round the fire they told him in turn of all that they could remember of their journeys and adventures. At first he pretended to take some notes; but he often fell asleep; and when he woke he would say: “How splendid! How wonderful! But where were we?’ Then they went on with the story from the point where he had begun to nod.

(...)

When nearly a fortnight had passed Frodo looked out of his window and saw that there had been a frost in the night, and the cobwebs were like white nets. Then suddenly he knew that he must go, and say good-bye to Bilbo.

Bilbo’s gift-giving follows. The mithril coat and Sting (forgetting he already had given them) and all his notes go to Frodo; a bag of Smaug gold goes to Sam (should he be getting married); two beautiful Elvish pipes for Merry and Pippin. Then Bilbo asks after the Ring (with the lines moved to the wagon scene in the film).

He dithers some more, sings an old hobbit's version of the Road song, then,

...[A]s Bilbo murmured the last words his head dropped on his chest and he slept soundly.

The evening deepened in the room, and the firelight burned brighter; and they looked at Bilbo as he slep and saw that his face was smiling. For some time they say in silence; and then Sam looking round at the room and shadows flickering on the walls, said softly:

‘I don’t think, Mr. Frodo, that he’s done much writing while we’ve been away….’

Bilbo opens his eyes at this, confessing to chronic sleepiness, also confessing that he desires only to write poetry anymore. Bilbo asks Frodo if he might “tidy up” his book.

“Collect all my notes and papers, and my diary too, and take them with you, if you will. …and when you’ve knocked things in shape, come back, and I’ll run over it. I won’t be too critical.

The very next day, the hobbits leave with Gandalf.

This part of the story is so sad-sweet, so autumnal, I love it while it pains me to read it. I picture Frodo arriving in Rivendell relieved to be away from Mordor, and happy to be heading home, susceptible again to the intense but soft beauty of the place. Yet I imagine him being deeply affected by how he finds Bilbo.

In The Stairs of Cirith Ungol, Frodo had been in despair, anguished for Faramir and his men as he watched the hosts ride out from Minas Morgul.

He thought,

I am too late. All is lost. I tarried on the way. All is lost. Even if my errand is performed, no one will ever know. There will be no one I can tell. It will be in vain.’ Overcome by weakness he wept. And still the host of Morgul crossed the bridge.

There would be no one he could tell because everyone he might tell would be dead. He already believed his cousins and the rest of the Fellowship were dead. If evil overwhelmed the West, even Rivendell would fall. Bilbo, then, would be dead, too.

How thrilled Frodo must have been, how keen must have been his anticipation to be reunited with Bilbo in Rivendell. Bilbo would be waiting on pins and needles to hear Frodo’s account. But Bilbo had become too feeble, too old. His mind drifted, and he had gone beyond interest in the world’s stories -- the stories of Sam and the cousins, even of his beloved Frodo.

Reading this section, I imagined a decided change in Frodo’s attitude, precipitated by that difficult, sad realization -- as if it were then that he first seriously entertained the idea of quitting forever the life he knew. Frodo had fit into his old world; his story had been a part of its story. But now his story had diverged and no longer fit with that of his world's.

Into what larger story did his own now fit? Did it fit into any story? Without a greater context in which to see his story: his life -- without that special hearer (Bilbo, who had followed both Frodo's personal story and the larger story of events outside the Shire) -- Frodo must have felt very adrift. How difficult it would have been to sense what he had been through as meaningful.

I think writing the Red Book, although he only began it as a commission for Bilbo, helped him begin to see the part that he had played. In Aman, I have believed, he would come to see it better still.

Above Minas Morgul, in anguish and despair, Frodo had mourned, "Even if my errand is performed, no one will ever know. There will be no one I can tell. It will be in vain." In the end, there was someone to tell, and people did come to know. I am one of them.

It was not in vain.

~ Mechtild




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[identity profile] pearlette.livejournal.com 2006-05-15 09:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow.

Beautiful poem, beautiful Frodo, beautiful thoughts.

I'd never made that connection between Frodo and Earendil before, in terms of their respective fates. Both of them helped to bring about grace and redemption for their worlds, but it was not without cost - even more so in Frodo's case.

Wow. Just ... wow.

Mechtild, where are jan-u-wine's poems archived?

[identity profile] mechtild.livejournal.com 2006-05-15 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, Pearl. You are another thinker with a wonderful vision for post-Quest Frodo labouring over the Red Book. One day you must let me post a segment of you gorgeous Star of the Sea when I make a manip that might set it off. What would you say to that?

Jan-u-wine's poetry can be found in the link posted at the bottom of the poem above. The site is called "LOTR Scrapbook," but the link takes you right to her page. As I told Maeglian, read, "No Child of My Body." What a weeper!

[identity profile] hobbitlove83.livejournal.com 2006-05-15 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)
This is utterly, utterly beautiful, Mechtild-
you just found the perfect Frodo face for that painting!

And jan-u-wine's poem is so fitting, and wonderful!

In the end, there was someone to tell, and people did come to know. I am one of them.

It was not in vain.


Amen.

[identity profile] ex-lbilover.livejournal.com 2006-05-15 10:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, I have added you :) Please do tell her. I've spent some time this afternoon reading her poetry and, well, I'm not good at writing feedback about poetry, but it moved me very deeply.

[identity profile] mechtild.livejournal.com 2006-05-15 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Amen, indeed.

Hobbitlove, how lovely of you to stop by and how gracious your words! I will pass on your comment to Jan-u-wine, too, who is not on LJ.

[identity profile] mechtild.livejournal.com 2006-05-15 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I shall pass that message on! :)

Just amazing, both the manip and the poem.

(Anonymous) 2006-05-16 12:48 am (UTC)(link)
oohhhhhhhhhhh, how incredibly beautiful... that manip.. it takes my breath away, and the poem is a perfect accompaniment. Jan-u-wine ever has her finger on the pulse of Frodo's soul.

Sigh.

Also I enjoyed so much Metchild's essay... I had forgotten that that's pretty much the only place where Frodo weeps. It made me so sad to read it again.
It makes me remember why I'm avoiding re-reading LOTR for a while... it affects me too much. He experiences so much loneliness and sorrow. It really is depressing(for me). I love Frodo, and hate to see him so miserable.

But wow...

thank you all, again.
Mary(crb)

[identity profile] lembas-junkie.livejournal.com 2006-05-16 12:55 am (UTC)(link)
Gosh, Mech...I just love your manips! :) That was a very nice poem, too. My favorites are still Psyche, and the Chatterton ones; but these new ones you make are very mrrrrow, too!

Lembas :)

Re: Just amazing, both the manip and the poem.

[identity profile] mechtild.livejournal.com 2006-05-16 03:10 am (UTC)(link)
Mary (crb), thank you for your heartfelt comments. Truly, they mean a lot to me, for you seem to have poured yourself into them.

I will email jan-u-wine and tell her of your comment. If you browse through the collection of her Frodo poems at that site, you will see how deeply she seems to have got into Frodo's POV, reflecting his many moods. And the Frodo whose POV (point of view) she has got herself into is noble, thinking, wise, aesthetic -- but very, very human (LOL, I should say, "hobbit-like"), with strong feelings, sensitive to those of others.

It is a good sign, I think, that you are affected so deeply by reading LotR that you can't bear to do it often. What a powerful book it is!

I hope you read this, since you are not a registered LJ user. I know you will not be getting any sort of automatic notice that I have replied.

~ Mechtild

[identity profile] mechtild.livejournal.com 2006-05-16 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, Lembas! Want something more "mrrrrow"?

Just hold your eyeballs. One of these days I will post my "erotic manips" that I have been working on. They are made from black and white photos (tasteful, more atmospheric than any sort of explicit), so they have presented new challenges to my novice skills at working with these programs. I am pleased with them, though, even if they aren't perfect. I will post them one day soon.

many kisses

[identity profile] marigold6.livejournal.com 2006-05-16 05:11 am (UTC)(link)
Another wonderful manip, Mech. And thank you for Jan-U-Wine's poem, and the link to her other's...yes, "No Child..." is a beautiful and sad piece - I started to cry. Please tell her thank you for her exceptional words; I've bookmarked the site for the future.

[identity profile] pearlette.livejournal.com 2006-05-16 09:40 am (UTC)(link)
One day you must let me post a segment of you gorgeous Star of the Sea when I make a manip that might set it off. What would you say to that?

Oh!

I'd be delighted and honoured if you did that. :):):):):):)

I must humbly confess that Star of the Sea is the fic I'm most proud of: it's the story in which I managed to reflect most closely my own interpretation of canon. It's not perfect, and it does need some slight editing (only very slight, nothing major) but it's the story which satisfies me most, out of all my attempts at fanfic.

[identity profile] pearlette.livejournal.com 2006-05-16 09:49 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, Mechtild, that really does strike me afresh ... that for Frodo writing the account of the War of the Ring was not just about his own catharsis but also setting it down for the posterity of his people, for future generations.

I get frustrated with an overdue emphasis on Frodo's personal angst (great as that was). It seems to ignore the larger picture that Tolkien had in mind. And it also ignores the spirituality of the story ... and indeed Frodo's own spirituality.

It's never just about him. That's why I think Frodo totally rocks. That's why I love Tolkien's natural, organic portrayal of virtue. The virtuous characters in his drama aren't boring or static. They have weight and depth and movement. One of the things that hooks me about Tolkien is the way he transforms archetypes. His characters aren't written to novelistic rules, they're players in an epic, and yes, they ARE archetypes. But they're three-dimensional ones.

Tolkien says in the Collected Letters that on Eressea Frodo would have come to understand much better his overall place in the big scheme of things ... to understand and embrace his own 'littleness'. That was part of his healing.

As indeed it is for all of us.

[identity profile] mechtild.livejournal.com 2006-05-16 01:24 pm (UTC)(link)
It is an utterly gorgeous fic. And true to Tolkien. And yet, imaginatively, opening Tolkien out to the reader.

If I ever should get around to this dreamed-of entry, I would, of course, submit to you the section I meant to use; if you still had not done the "slight editing" you wanted to do for these purported imperfections, you could edit that section to your satisfaction.

Re: many kisses

[identity profile] mechtild.livejournal.com 2006-05-16 01:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Marigold6, you are very thoughtful and gracious. I so appreciate that you have commented.

I will pass on your comment to jan-u-wine, too. Maybe she'll feel forced to get an LJ! *grin*

[identity profile] whiteling.livejournal.com 2006-05-16 01:57 pm (UTC)(link)
I may be sharp-eyed, but I'm obviously dim-witted to boot. Of course it is David's statue. D'oh (where did I have my head? :D).

Anyway, I quite enjoy this striking accumulation of Frodo's and David's in that picturesque era. ;-)

[identity profile] mechtild.livejournal.com 2006-05-16 03:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Great comments, Pearl. I want to point to this one just quickly:

One of the things that hooks me about Tolkien is the way he transforms archetypes. His characters aren't written to novelistic rules, they're players in an epic, and yes, they ARE archetypes. But they're three-dimensional ones.

This is so true. I never could quite fathom some of the vehement criticisms his novel got when it originally came out, especially the slams against the characters as being dull = unbelievable = too good to be true. They were very believable and recognizable -- and accessible -- or we wouldn't still be 'recognizing' and 'accessing' them like mad today.

[identity profile] maeglian.livejournal.com 2006-05-16 05:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Good to *be* here. :-)

No, I haven't read the others yet. "Never enough time, never enough......."

[identity profile] pearlette.livejournal.com 2006-05-16 07:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks very much, Mechtild. I would appreciate that.

(((hugs))))

[identity profile] mechtild.livejournal.com 2006-05-16 10:47 pm (UTC)(link)
I thought that was what you meant. With Goliath's head at the bottom.

Isn't it?

[identity profile] whiteling.livejournal.com 2006-05-17 08:42 am (UTC)(link)
Exactly, that was what I meant (but only remembered half of the names involved).

[identity profile] este-tangletoes.livejournal.com 2006-05-17 09:55 am (UTC)(link)
Another exceptional essay.

There is little I can add to this highly deserved praise, Mechtild. The look on Frodo’s face and the setting you chose are complete. You have a great eye for beauty and emotion. And your technical skills are not to be sneezed :D

The chapter you quoted from ‘Many Partings’ is very sad indeed. Many of us have experienced not being recognised by old loved-ones. This chapter always makes me tear up. Even more so, now that you have brought to the fore Frodo’s weeping scene in ‘The Stairs of Cirith Ungo’l.

Thank you also for pointing out the following:

I think writing the Red Book, although he only began it as a commission for Bilbo, helped him begin to see the part that he had played. In Aman, I have believed, he would come to see it better still.

I have never looked at the writing of the book as therapeutic, until now.

I suppose if he were totally despondent, he wouldn't have bothered; he would just have waited until death and/or madness took him.

This has made it a little easier for me to accept that he could not stay in the Shire.


I was quite overcome by jan-u-wine’s 'Aiya Earendil'

…He sleeps and wakes and sleeps again
and oft-times knows me not,…

The words touched me deeply. Again because I have experienced this in my own life. Thank you jan-u-wine I enjoy your poetry very much.

[identity profile] mechtild.livejournal.com 2006-05-17 03:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, that was beautifully said, Este. It would seem that every facet of the story is one that touches readers deeply, though not all readers equally. It depends on the life experience of the reader.

I just read another poem of jan-u-wine's, which I may just have to feature with some screencaps or something. It's about writing the Red Book at Bag End, too. It is SO great.

Here's a link to it:

The Tale of the Tale:
http://lotrscrapbook.bookloaf.net/poetry/poems/jan/januwine_tale.html



Two other super post-Quest poems I just read of Jan's are:

They Say - a look at Frodo from Sam's POV, thinking of what folks are thinking of his master:

http://lotrscrapbook.bookloaf.net/poetry/poems/jan/januwine_theysay.html


The Last Turn of the Road - a stunning portrayal from Frodo's POV of his coming home to Bag End (it seems to be the restored, not ruined Bag End):

http://lotrscrapbook.bookloaf.net/poetry/poems/jan/januwine_last.html


~ Mechtild

[identity profile] mechtild.livejournal.com 2006-05-17 03:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Pearl, I just wanted to direct you to a comment I just made in reply to Este, on May 17, below.

Since you are enjoying jan-u-wine's poems, I just wanted to recommend three that I just read, all post-Quest, that I LOVE. I put the titles and links in that post box. Perhaps you already have read them.

Seriously, these are just so good, I feel like featuring each one with some screencaps or something -- I've used up all my paintings of young men with books or writing things.

~ Mechtild

[identity profile] goldberry-b.livejournal.com 2006-05-18 02:49 am (UTC)(link)
this is so breathtaking.. the work you've done is so flawless I can't imagine another face there ;) and the way he mirrors the David is pretty nifty

the poem is so beautiful as is your essay... I hope to come back to this when I have a bit more time.. I"m rather hanging by a thread tonight

thank you for sharing !

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