If Frodo had inner dialogue to go with this manip in a prose scene, he might marvel to himself over his good fortune to have won her love, thinking what a topping lass she was and how dashed lucky he was to get her.
Can't edit my comment, so I want to underscore that I was overdoing it to make a point. Of course Frodo could do better inner dialogue than that! :D
P.S. Yes, the poem does indeed beautifully convey love, as such.
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Date: 2006-04-04 11:16 pm (UTC)Can't edit my comment, so I want to underscore that I was overdoing it to make a point. Of course Frodo could do better inner dialogue than that! :D
P.S. Yes, the poem does indeed beautifully convey love, as such.