I just read "No Child of My Body." Oh, to die for. *weeps copiously*
Now, THAT's a great portrayal of what Frodo might feel holding Elanor. I confess it's very like the sorts of things I had picturing him feeling, and had planned a scene late in the story of him holding Elanor and thinking such things, but it was going to be from Rosamunda's POV, so the reader would have to intuit this line of thought by the way he held and looked (or could not look) at her.
Re: Perfection
Date: 2006-04-06 08:20 pm (UTC)Now, THAT's a great portrayal of what Frodo might feel holding Elanor. I confess it's very like the sorts of things I had picturing him feeling, and had planned a scene late in the story of him holding Elanor and thinking such things, but it was going to be from Rosamunda's POV, so the reader would have to intuit this line of thought by the way he held and looked (or could not look) at her.