~ detail from "Frodo in His Study"



My "new" Frodo manip is actually a re-do, but a re-do from the ground up....


Recently, looking for a different work, I found a much better copy of the painting I used for my first version of this manip, Portrait of a Young Gentleman Reading (or, "Portrait of a Gentleman in his Study"), by Lorenzo Lotto. Goaded by its clarity, I made my own screencap of the image from FotR (Amon Hen) I had found on an internet gallery and used for the face last year, and re-did the manip.

I credit this to a fan of the manips who liked the first version of this particular Frodo Art Travesty so well, I wondered if I could improve upon it. The version I first did, which she saw, never fully pleased me because it was so small and murky, although it had its own charm. (It can be seen here.) I did not take it down from the Photobucket gallery, however, because it really does look like a different manip. The copy of the painting I made it from is so different (in colour values and in resolution), it makes the finished manip different, and I sort of like them both.

Below is the part of Tolkien's text that inspired me to make this manip in the first place, from the last chapter of The Return of the King, "The Grey Havens"....


One evening Sam came into the study and found his master looking very strange. He was very pale and his eyes seemed to see things far away.

‘What’s the matter, Mr. Frodo?’ said Sam.

‘I am wounded,’ he answered, ‘wounded; it will never really heal.’

But then he got up, and the turn seemed to pass, and he was quite himself the next day. It was not until afterwards that Sam recalled that the date was October the sixth. Two years before on that day it was dark in the dell under Weathertop.




~ "Portait of a Gentleman in His Study," by Lorenzo Lotto, c. 1527:



~ Mechtild



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From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com


Oh, my that's so beautiful. The colors are so rich. I compared this one and the previous one, and it's quite a difference. And the quote fits so well. I wished they had kept closer to the book dialogue there in the movie.

From: [identity profile] mechtild.livejournal.com


Me, too. They made Frodo seem to have a slight shoulder twinge in the film, rather than anything like his full-blown anniversary illness. This was another thing that made book virgins wonder why the heck he felt he had to sail off into the West. Couldn't he have taken a couple of Ibuprofen?

From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com


Yes, exactly. I watched part of the movie yesterday on Starz or one of those stations, and they did a marvelous job with the make up and lighting and Elijah was wonderful there, you could see that something was very wrong, but the dialogue just didn't do enough to explain why he was so sick and why he had to leave ME. I find I always want more when I watch the movies, even though I believe they're wonderful and as good as most anybody could have done. I just wanted them to make us realize what the quest had done to him. ah well, we do have fanfic for that.

From: [identity profile] mechtild.livejournal.com


I find I always want more when I watch the movies, even though I believe they're wonderful and as good as most anybody could have done. I just wanted them to make us realize what the quest had done to him.

I am not faulting EW's job in the scene, they just didn't direct even what they had in a way that let viewers know the degree to which he was still suffering. They would not even have had to change the lines. They could have shown him at his desk really suffering a stab of pain, maybe with an infinitesimal flash from Weathertop to remind folks without a word what he was suffering from(they'd used this device well before, outside Minas Morgul - "I can feel his blade"), show him reacting with the full strength of that, just for an extra second or two or real time before he hears someone coming. They could start out with his make-up not quite so pale so that he could be seen to blanch. That would take another split second. Then they would show a shot of him quickly and heroically pulling himself together before Sam comes in. They they could show Sam do the slightest reaction shot, showing that he sensed something amiss instead of just blithely strolling to the desk and beginning to speak, only then marginally noticing something and asking if Frodo is all right. In real time, these changes would have taken perhaps footage running to the count of ten seconds. I think it would have been a huge help to viewers and greatly enriched the "plight of returning wounded" thread of the film's story.

But, like you, I really did love the films and still do. It's just one of the faults I felt, "Aw, too bad!" about, as a sort of missed opportunity for a really easy fix that would have accomplished so much.

From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com


You're right, it really wouldn't have taken a lot of time to enrich that scene so much.
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